Bonjour je dois faire un résumé un anglais comme si on se présentait à une émission de cuisine ... Pouvez vous me dire quoi changer? Je suis nulle en anglais...
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Bonjour je dois faire un résumé un anglais comme si on se présentait à une émission de cuisine ... Pouvez vous me dire quoi changer? Je suis nulle en anglais...
Hello! I Go to your casting "Master chef" because I want to be a best cooker . My name is Jeanne and I'm 15 years old. My passion is cooking because I Cook since I am small. I Think I am a best cooker because I'm a Queen of the lasagnes and cookies. I already went to holiday camp of kitchen . Not only my family love my coking but Also my friends. Too, I watching cooking Shows, espessialy your Tv shows. I am very determined and unique this is because you must choose me . Thank you ! Bye !
Hello! I Go to your casting "Master chef" because I want to be a best cooker . My name is Jeanne and I'm 15 years old. My passion is cooking because I Cook since I am small. I Think I am a best cooker because I'm a Queen of the lasagnes and cookies. I already went to holiday camp of kitchen . Not only my family love my coking but Also my friends. Too, I watching cooking Shows, espessialy your Tv shows. I am very determined and unique this is because you must choose me . Thank you ! Bye !
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1. Réponse roilennon
Hello!
I came to your casting master chef because I want to become a best cooker. My name is ... and Im.... My passion is cooking because I started cooking really young. I think Im the best cooker because I'm The Queen of the lasagnes and cookies. I have already went to an holiday cook camp. Not only my family love my cooking but also my friends. Also, I watch cooking shows, especially your TV show. I'm very determined and unique and this is why you must choose me.